Monday, November 23, 2015

Just my Persuasive Essay

I haven't wrote on this blog in over a year. I'm posting my lame persuasive essay in attempt to get back in the swing of things.


Why the Driving Age Must Stay at 16

            If you’re like most Americans, you probably still remember the day you received your very first driver’s license. And who wouldn’t? Driving around with your best friends while blasting your favorite songs on the radio makes you feel invincible. Earning your license is the first major step into adulthood. Something as essential to everyday living as driving is a privilege necessary for sixteen-year-olds.

There are some people, however, who like to point a finger at all teenage drivers and blame their immaturity for vehicle accident fatalities. Such a claim is outrageously unfair to the percentage of sixteen and seventeen-year-olds whose maturity far surpasses the expectations of someone their age. I’m sure that we have all met some teenager before who acts more like a thirty-year-old than your actually thirty-something-year-old friends. On the other hand, there are plenty of “adults” out there whose sophistication is more like that of a middle schooler. But this factor never comes into play when said immature adult goes to renew their license on their twenty-first or twenty-fifth birthdays. So how can we possibly deny teenagers their driving privilege based on their assumed maturation, when we cannot even prove that all our older drivers also contain that same level of responsibility?

 Learning to drive a two ton metal death machine would be scary at any age. Practice makes perfect and sometimes learning the hard way is actually the best way. Sure, sixteen-year-olds have the highest rates of teenage passenger deaths per licensed driver and per mile driven (Institute for Highway Safety). But driving around town with a large yellow sign indicating that you are a first timer, and a professional driving instructor in the passenger seat with his foot always right next to the back-up brake could never possibly prepare you for every situation you will meet on the road. According to Forbes.com, the average driver will file a claim for a collision about once every 17.9 years, and there are about ten million accidents in the U.S every year. Hold for the good news. The National Safety Council has done the research to prove that in 2009, just three of every one thousand accidents involved fatalities. So what can we take from this? Car accidents are completely unavoidable. Just think about all the people close to you who have been in a collision in the last five years. But we can also learn from this that very, very few car accidents actually claim a life. Thus, it is quite unwarranted for us to strip teens of their ability to drive in an attempt to stop something as inescapable as car accidents.

            In addition to the obvious complainants (teenagers who would have to wait an extra two or more years to earn their driver’s license), parents feel pretty strongly about this matter. “In an era where free time is a commodity, parents just don’t have the option of driving their children around. Until the state gets a viable mass transit system, that issue won’t go away.” Here, the author of the editorial, Driving Age Should Stay at 16, published in a February issue of the Northern Star, makes a convincing argument that most parents just don’t have the time of day to haul their teenagers around when they have their own commitments to take care of. Responsibilities such as their jobs, housework, grocery shopping, and paying the family’s bills all require a lot of time and effort, leaving these busy and fatigued parents little to no time to cart their teenagers to school, sporting events, and their part-time jobs. Raising the legal driving age to eighteen would rob not only teenagers, but also their parents of their freedom.

            Earning your driver’s license is something that most of us are eventually going to do just because it is absolutely essential to our everyday lives. It is unfair and unreasonable to assume that all teenagers are too irresponsible to take on a task as serious as driving a car. And while many teenagers are involved in car accidents, so are plenty of adults. Sometimes lessons just have to be learned the hard way. When parents and teens are as busy as they are nowadays with school, work, and everything in between, it is irrational to assume that parents have the time of day to haul their kids around another two years. It is only sensible for the legal driving age to remain at sixteen.

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